in your shadow
in your splendor
i yet wonder
what are you?
warm and tender
i surrender
and i wonder
why are you?
dark and hazeli surrender
and i wonder
why are you?
lost in gaze
i do wonder...
where are you?
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Octpowrimo - #11 - Connect
crowded queues varied views tragic news! I seek to escape... need to over-generalize. Each viewpoint - its own faded hue orange, reds and bl...
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I often just sit up and try to figure out what is it that i am supposed to be hanging around here for? which question is assigned for me to ... -
awaiting the discomfort of telling a lie I turn in my sleep troubled by thoughts not mine to keep not mine to believe.. sleep evades me ..as... -
Out alone in the balmy night just looking for someone to fight I stand alone by the swing fighting the frustrations from within Nothing.. to...
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'What are you' ke badle 'Who are you' nahin hona chahiye?
@aakash - well sentient doesn't have to have personification and thus maybe more apt as "what" than "who". and the question "what are you?" makes the topic more amorphous and thus more out of grasp than the question " who are you" i feel.
Ohh i dont mind the usage of 'what' at all, in fact i was reminded of Ghalib's 'har ek bata pe kahte ho tum ki tu kya hai'. Here he did not say 'tu kaun hai' but a 'tu kya hai'.
I wanted to know if THAT was the intention. What say madam anki?
kyun sharminda karte ho humari soch ke saath galib ka naam lete ho
hum unki baat ka zikr kya karenge..
khud apna hi fasana bas bayan karenge
Interesting! I wrote a similar poem but on a different topic. May be you want to check it out...
BTW how have you been?
-Hari
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