loony tunes in my head
chirping ahead
walking adept
striking a chord
beating the thoughts
i am singing a song
laughin along
who goes there?
nobody's care
scary .. hairy ..
..crawling !
like a spider
~~~
slowly creeping behind
the fear
the fear.. in my mind
all in my mind he says
trapped in white halls
city halls - the great!
i wonder.. wander
saunter aloud
there is nobody here
nobody about!!
its all but me
in this pretty head
"oh what a creep"
and then.......................... she left!
11 comments:
She???
Sab normal chhe na?. =)
That apart, well written.
bilkul normal che!!
was just trying to hv a perspective on things.. am not the only one crazy in this wrld.. ;-)
hey.. i hope u wudnt mind me commenting on ur blog.. i was browsing thru and saw the spilt milk hanging in mid air.....
i hvae a blog of my own... feel free to comment
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i just couldnt help smiling the whole while i read this piece...
so anki had fallen for him and now has he fallen for you too???
nothing else would trigger such a melancholy symphony...
:P
Of course not. Main kataar mein aapke bahut aage lagaa hua huun. :-)
@the devil in paradise: why would i mind!! :)
@humble: nothing like tht sire.. dont go on speculating.. things arent so romantic in this side of the world..
tho theres no harm wondering abt it :)
@aakaash: ohhhh.. to lagta hai aapke peeche kafi log pade (oops khade ;) hain! hehe
tho wht do u think.. shud i change this title to loony tunes??
Well, no the title still works for me. It is always the hint that is more tantalizing than the real whole.
Aur jin logon ki tum baat kar rahi ho, woh bhi kataar mein hain. Toh apne haath toh fir bhi khaali hain.
Waise how abt coming back to this side of the world (in response to your response to humbl devil)? =)
@aakash: coming bck..there is still time .. filhaal bas yahin guzara karna hai!
When was it that you left?
anki! even while i was reading it for the first could see how you wrote. u didn't have to work on it long right. cause long time ago i wrote something that flowed in a very similar style and pattern and it just kind of flows. in the mind. one phrase after the one before.
i was really startled at the " oh what a creep" part. thats my favorite.
hope you are well. and your life, your day-dream is amusing and entertaining enough to keep you dreaming and weaving the storyline.
@aakash: its been a month since i left home.. again!
@ravali: yeah.. i wrote this like within 10 mins.. just wrote it without pausing long enuff to analyse if it made any sense..
i am doin as well as i can.. going thru one day to another..holding on to the dreams..
coz - you're never given a dream without an ability to fulfill it.
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