Harried dresses,
Worrisome tresses,
curling about in frenzy!
gazing in longing..
at lines and mirrors,
believing the lies and sinners.
each bearing a silver lining,
a reflection, of its own.
Do I map ?
Do I map ?
to the expectation of beauties...
you so rarely adore
Evenly you look at me,
unimpressed.
Consciously I wonder..,
and you close the door!
6 comments:
Ummm though i like it and that picture on top makes it all the more better.
I would accept that i did not get all of it. The capitalization of some words, adds to the haziness of the first stanza. Whats the story?
I loved the way the second and the thord para's are. Aur ek spelling mistake hai madam. Jaldi mein thi kya? Kyunki tum toh yuun na the.
Cheers.
oops.. ji jaldi mein hi thi..
ab sab theek hai... shayad..
review again?
yeh thoda adhura lag raha hai...
hai kya???
btw, the last i remmebr, you had staright hair...correct me if i m wrong...been ages since i saw you..:D
Hmmmm thoda samajh mein nahi aaya. Too many double negatives ;)
Btw, thanks for the comment. It made my day :D
@devil: yup..straight hair..:)
@vibhanshu: you are most welcome! :)
the poem is just abt a girl conscious abt her looks..
Arre I understood that :)
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