{aching for you
is more of a habit
a morbid
sense of being i feel
but being with you
is suddenly tragic
trapping in itself
the emotions are real..
its not a change in season
i fear, its a change
in the memory of you
for loving you is a memory
a memory more lovely than .. you}
2 comments:
First 6 lines: amazing, i mean superbly amazing.
the end does not justify the beginning, but then no end is worth its beginning.
Loved?
@aakash: no sir.. i am as usual, just 'lost' :-)
I agree with you regarding the first 6 lines.. but the magic had just passed me by.
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